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sid ([personal profile] sid) wrote in [personal profile] aurora_novarum 2006-11-20 03:00 am (UTC)

I enjoyed this a lot! Even if it is Gen, lol.

I like the way you handled Makepeace, with him almost capitulating after talking to Hammond. Almost, but not quite. I've never been able to think of him as a truly bad guy. Someday I may write my own Makepeace story...

Excellent job! :-)

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