As you very well know, it's never too late for feedback. :-D
It was fun to play with Jack and explore the inter-dynamics of the SG-1 incarnations. Poor fools, all trying to help each other and stepping on each other to do it. Glad Jack has straightened them all out...mostly.
And hee! Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. I still see spots where I wish I had tinkered maybe a bit more, but...this was my "recovery" story.
I ended up having a craving for Italian food while writing this story. :-) I think every area has a place like Antonio's. It's a blending of a couple of places near me. :-D
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It was fun to play with Jack and explore the inter-dynamics of the SG-1 incarnations. Poor fools, all trying to help each other and stepping on each other to do it. Glad Jack has straightened them all out...mostly.
And hee! Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. I still see spots where I wish I had tinkered maybe a bit more, but...this was my "recovery" story.
I ended up having a craving for Italian food while writing this story. :-) I think every area has a place like Antonio's. It's a blending of a couple of places near me. :-D