This was my first attempt at Teal'c POV. I was surprised at how easy his voice came to me. (Although I made the newbie mistake of blurring the names together...I may go back and fix that still).
"She sounds like trouble with a capital T... no offense Teal'c."
I admit, I wondered if that line was a bit much myself, but I couldn't resist. It's just so...so...yeah.
The beauty of fic is that Jack never leaves the team. *nods* (Although I hadn't planned per se to have him there. He just...naturally showed up when I was writing).
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This was my first attempt at Teal'c POV. I was surprised at how easy his voice came to me. (Although I made the newbie mistake of blurring the names together...I may go back and fix that still).
"She sounds like trouble with a capital T... no offense Teal'c."
I admit, I wondered if that line was a bit much myself, but I couldn't resist. It's just so...so...yeah.
The beauty of fic is that Jack never leaves the team. *nods* (Although I hadn't planned per se to have him there. He just...naturally showed up when I was writing).