Very interesting idea, whoever came up with it. It was cool to see into another author's head a bit while rereading their work. I'm always interested in reading other people's thoughts about their own stuff.

I loved this fic when I first read it, way back when. Pat is a great OC: interesting enough to have a story told through her, but not so overwhelming that she detracts from the canon characters. Hard balance to acheive. Well done. I even accepted your POV slips with barely a twitch; normally it's my biggest pet peeve in fanfic.

In an effort to kickstart my stubborn muse, I recently went through my fics and wrote a brief paragraph on what I liked and didn't about each of them. It was good for me, but kind of superficial. I may have to steal this idea and try it for myself. Thanks. :)