"The Odyssey's Daniel Jackson..." Obviously not many people actually know that Daniel's streak of luck involves actually dying?? Wonder if SG-1 secretly keeps that to themselves?? Marks seems like a posterboy for the SGC, which is great, because its a position usually designated just to SG-1, and while SG-1 is very important, "every man and woman...does their duty" and they should be recognized as such...

I do look forward to seeing more of this (and like you, I generally abhore posting WIP's... I did it once, and I'm not sure I ever want to do it again...