I think Daniel was trying to do both pictures and Swedish and failing at both. :-)
"Apparently green is bad," Daniel commented.
Hee!
I purposefully did this as a precursor to "Serpent's Venom".
Not too sure if you meant this sentence to say this: I think I know I see the problem. Kinda sounds like she's either correcting herself and needs some punctuation, or you did an edit without removing the edited part. :)
Yeah, it's called, rethinking the sentence and having a brain fart half-way through editing. D'oh!
(what's funny is I just finished reading/fb'ing your latest fic and immediately checked my email to find the notice of this comment and wondered...how did thraes respond to my fb so fast?)
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"Apparently green is bad," Daniel commented.
Hee!
I purposefully did this as a precursor to "Serpent's Venom".
Not too sure if you meant this sentence to say this: I think I know I see the problem. Kinda sounds like she's either correcting herself and needs some punctuation, or you did an edit without removing the edited part. :)
Yeah, it's called, rethinking the sentence and having a brain fart half-way through editing. D'oh!
(what's funny is I just finished reading/fb'ing your latest fic and immediately checked my email to find the notice of this comment and wondered...how did thraes respond to my fb so fast?)