Had to wait two days until I had enough uninterrupted time to read the story all at once, but it was certainly worth the wait! (And for you it was a much longer wait!)
I'm very glad Brandon gets to meet SG-1 and glimpse some, if not all of, the truth, in the end. It just wouldn't be fair otherwise! You did a good job with all the OCs here, including Bailey (of whom I've already become inordinately fond!). Even while I knew what was happening, it was interesting to see the suggestions the crew had—and Tommy was pretty on target! (Hope the alien aloe heals him well!)
I also enjoyed Brandon's family—an essential part of who he is and how he got to be there. I can imagine his frustration at not being able to tell them anything!
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I'm very glad Brandon gets to meet SG-1 and glimpse some, if not all of, the truth, in the end. It just wouldn't be fair otherwise! You did a good job with all the OCs here, including Bailey (of whom I've already become inordinately fond!). Even while I knew what was happening, it was interesting to see the suggestions the crew had—and Tommy was pretty on target! (Hope the alien aloe heals him well!)
I also enjoyed Brandon's family—an essential part of who he is and how he got to be there. I can imagine his frustration at not being able to tell them anything!
Great story!