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aurora_novarum ([personal profile] aurora_novarum) wrote2009-01-29 10:33 pm
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Writing meme

Ooh, writing meme! I can never resist these...to do or to visit at other people's.

Comment with a story I've written, and I will tell you something I knew, learned, or wondered about while writing it that didn't make it onto the page.

Gakked from [livejournal.com profile] kalquessa.

You can find all my fic listed here.

[identity profile] beanpot.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Insurance Snafu!
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Script Form Prequel to Insurance SNAFU

[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm, Insurance Snafu...Hmm, I've done a dvd commentary on this one, so...something not said before...

I did have backstory for the Pentagon, of course. I can just imagine the conversations with Davis and O'Neill.

(OMG, you've gotten me to write a prequel!)

Davis: Sir, we're getting a red flag from Cheyenne's CPO division.

O'Neill: Flex time during lockdowns again?

Davis: No, sir, it's Dr. Jackson.

O'Neill (suddenly serious): Daniel? What is it?

Davis: Well, he's being rejected for (trying hard not to smile at all, not funny, not at all) life insurance.

[O'Neill chuckles.]

Davis: Sir, the CPO is at her wit's end with the redacted file and she's asking some pretty pointed questions. I think we have to tell her...[wow, how to explain this?]

O'Neill: Does she have clearance?

Davis: Yes, sir. She's our liaison when we have civilian casualties, but it's more need to know.

O'Neill: Fine, I'll sign off on it.

[Pen pauses...]

O'Neill: You know, I'm due for a briefing at the White House in twenty...and Daniel may just think this is all a joke.

Davis (confused): Sir, I'm sure Doctor Jackson would take this...

O'Neill (waving him off): Yeah, but he knows how my mind works. I'm sure Hayes wouldn't mind. Maybe I should get Hammond's John Hancock too...

Davis: Sir, I really don't think...

O'Neill (with a dangerous twinkle in his eye): I'll get this back to you soon, Major.

[Later, Davis gets the authorization, with just O'Neill and Hayes's signature. He glances at summary report and shakes his head. Nine Lives Jackson. This woman doesn't know what she's in for. He'd dealt with Pat Jennings before, and liked her. Poor soul. He couldn't resist writing "Good Luck" on a post it before closing the file and putting it in the courier bag.]

Re: Script Form Prequel to Insurance SNAFU

[identity profile] beanpot.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it!!

And no ponies!
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Re: Script Form Prequel to Insurance SNAFU

[personal profile] aelfgyfu_mead 2009-01-31 01:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love this! I must say, I saw it and thought, "There's no way she could write a prequel to that!" I was wrong!
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Re: Script Form Prequel to Insurance SNAFU

[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com 2009-01-31 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
*cracks up*

I defy you to sell that line!
Oh, don't defy me. :-)

Re: Script Form Prequel to Insurance SNAFU

[identity profile] sg-betty.livejournal.com 2009-01-31 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Ha! Yep, there's no way Daniel wouldn't have thought it was a joke! :)
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Re: Script Form Prequel to Insurance SNAFU

[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com 2009-01-31 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Well, he does know Jack. Heh.