Writing meme

[aurora_novarum]

Ooh, writing meme! I can never resist these...to do or to visit at other people's.

Comment with a story I've written, and I will tell you something I knew, learned, or wondered about while writing it that didn't make it onto the page.

Gakked from kalquessa.

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Comments

[aurora-novarum.livejournal.com]

It amuses me that you're specifically picking one ficlet by *number* of the WWJD. :-) Cracks up.

Okay, so..."Triple Layer Bittersweet Chocolate" (i.e. the Sam POV of WWJD)

(Yes, this was the segment I infamously "punted" back when the characters were fighting with the muse (http://aurora-novarum.livejournal.com/82857.html).)

Okay...this part:
He stared at her a moment, his mouth twitching in a smile but looking between her and Daniel as if they should share some unknown joke.

Sam was uncertain what he found amusing, but her dark mood held no humor.

I wondered whether Teal'c revealed much of his "Changeling" dream to his teammates. He mentioned how Daniel helped him in "Orpheus", but the details were vague. Sam was a big part of his subconscious comforting him at the SGC (even if she kept insisting on his drinking "warm milk" to his displeasure) and then of course glowy Daniel purposefully showed up.

So to Teal'c it was quite a moment--and thus something he would feel when he knew Sam was unsettled in her new role. Thus he shared a secret joke...except the other two weren't there/wouldn't remember, so they couldn't share the laugh at the punchline. Sam at least was aware there was something to his statement, even if she didn't understand and was still too sulky to try. *pets Sam*

Aw, SG-1...bonded in ways they don't even understand!

(And...I feel like I'm a sellout that I'm giving you a Teal'c moment instead of a Sam insight from this fic so...if you'd rather hear something about her, I can try again.

[kalquessa.livejournal.com]

No, this is perfect, I totally adored the three of them there, especially Teal'c with his bovine lactose line. Which cracked me up and was exactly right.