Typos? Darn. LOL. I'm still catching one here or there myself (um, like the title, oy. I was very tired and frustrated when I first played with posting this).
Thanks for the feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I was inspired to write this because I felt so bad for Harrid and Sallis. They were on screen so little, and then all this crap happened to them. It was only as I started getting into it that I realized what a box I created for myself to have a character that can't even smile or frown or blink. That's why I decided to give him some view of Daniel's mind. It gives a new perspective on Daniel's thoughts and gives Harrid something to do rather than just narrate what everyone had already seen on the screen...because that would've been awfully dull. Actually, I was afraid that would still be the case. ;-) I'm glad it worked for you.
Yeah, rereading the transcript, um...[shuffles feet], don't know where you go, but I confess I blatantly stole some scene descriptions in my source transcript. Since I was the transcriber, I didn't think it was cheating to plagiarize myself. LOL
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Date: 2005-12-28 09:59 pm (UTC)Thanks for the feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I was inspired to write this because I felt so bad for Harrid and Sallis. They were on screen so little, and then all this crap happened to them. It was only as I started getting into it that I realized what a box I created for myself to have a character that can't even smile or frown or blink. That's why I decided to give him some view of Daniel's mind. It gives a new perspective on Daniel's thoughts and gives Harrid something to do rather than just narrate what everyone had already seen on the screen...because that would've been awfully dull. Actually, I was afraid that would still be the case. ;-) I'm glad it worked for you.
Yeah, rereading the transcript, um...[shuffles feet], don't know where you go, but I confess I blatantly stole some scene descriptions in my source transcript. Since I was the transcriber, I didn't think it was cheating to plagiarize myself. LOL