Aurora's Stargate fic

Fascinating! First of all, I'd never read this fic before (and I loved it) so it was interesting to go through it cold and have your commentary on top of the story. Secondly, what a great idea to do the commentary at all! If you don't mind, I want to link to this and challenge my fic writing friends to do something similar. I was completely enchanted by the view into the thought process of creation. A friend recently did something like that for a piece of sculpture and it was equally enthralling to learn about its gestation, despite the radically different medium. Thanks so much for sharing!