You're braver than I am. I'm not willing to touch my first fic foray (ew, leftover alliteration from a story I betaed recently, sorry) with a ten foot pole. But then, I was heavier handed with the fanon cliches than you were.
The show did make the dumbest costume changes, didn't they? I had a good laugh in 200 when they called themselves on it. Love that it inspired a fic.
I like Daniel's confusion when he wakes in the infirmary. You portrayed discovering that the last year of your life was a dream quite well. Also liked the Sha're-Shifu-Oma comparison. Very cool.
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Date: 2008-10-15 12:23 am (UTC)The show did make the dumbest costume changes, didn't they? I had a good laugh in 200 when they called themselves on it. Love that it inspired a fic.
I like Daniel's confusion when he wakes in the infirmary. You portrayed discovering that the last year of your life was a dream quite well. Also liked the Sha're-Shifu-Oma comparison. Very cool.