this is one of my personal favorite fics, but I was cursing my first draft. Because...Flights of Ingenuity was originally supposed to be Jack's point of view, but it wasn't working at all.
When it was Jack's, it started with them in line for security and Teal'c starting to ask questions there at the displays you could see and getting strange looks from the crowd. It got trimmed down to a couple of odd looks when Teal'c is talking about Apollo 11 where there's people nearby.
(Rewatching Small Victories I realize that scene isn't quite gelling with canon since Teal'c pulled a "one small step for jaffa" line, but I'll fanwank it Teal'c saw the footage and didn't realize it was THAT fragile a craft).
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Date: 2009-01-31 02:24 am (UTC)When it was Jack's, it started with them in line for security and Teal'c starting to ask questions there at the displays you could see and getting strange looks from the crowd. It got trimmed down to a couple of odd looks when Teal'c is talking about Apollo 11 where there's people nearby.
(Rewatching Small Victories I realize that scene isn't quite gelling with canon since Teal'c pulled a "one small step for jaffa" line, but I'll fanwank it Teal'c saw the footage and didn't realize it was THAT fragile a craft).